My Family
There are four people in my family :my father , my mother , my brother and I . My father is a docter ,and he
works in a hospital .He is of medium height ,and he wears a glasses . My mother is a Math teacher . She is
of medium height and she has long curly hair. She wears a glasses, too. My father and I are student . I like
my family.
这篇习作作者思路清晰，逻辑性很强，把自己的家庭成员介绍的很清晰，行文流畅。没有语法时态等方面的错误。文章结尾 My father and I are student . “father ” 应该是brother之误。I like my family. “like ”改成“love ”语气和意义会更好。
