The "Sunshine Sports " program is warmly welcomed in our school. Nearly all the students have taken part in it.
Most students are interested in playing sports,because they could have lots of fun. Many students skip rope,because they believe it really keeps them healthy. They feel happy.Some students take a walk,because they enjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom.They feel relaxing. And a few students do nothing,because they have no enough room on the playground,and they even have no enough time to finish homework. They feel really worring.
No matter what students think about the program,all the students like the idea which is to make them happy and keep them fit at the same time.
1. “playing sports” 改为 “doing sports” 较好; 并且“could” 如果用在这里表 “推测”，不如can 好；
2. “Many students skip rope.” 改为“Many students like skipping a lot.” 更好；
3. “Some students take a walk.” 改为“Some students usually take walks after class.”更好；
4. “They feel relaxing.”句中的“relaxing”应改为“relaxed”，因为“relaxing”意思为“使人无精打彩；使人懒洋洋
的”，本句作者想表达“他们感到轻松。”，故“relaxed”有此意；
5. “They feel really worrying.”句中“worrying”改为“worried”，这两个都是形容词，但“worring”修饰物，不能指人；
本文时态运用合理，无拼写错误，写出了阳关体育运动给我们带来的欢乐和健康，并号召全体同学积极参加这项活动。可以
看出作者对“阳光体育活动”的关心和热爱。但注意一些英美人的习惯表达就更好了。希望你继续努力，争取写出更漂亮的句
子。
