In my life I have met many people who are really worth mentioning.But perhaps the most unforgettable person I have ever known is my English Teacher.
It is his special quality that is always kept in my memory.
For one thing,I was attracked by his wide range of knowledge.I remember that we students always attended his class with great eaherness because his lectures were humourously delivered,and he never failed to give us valuable advice.Nothing seemed difficult to learn after his explanation.
For another,I was deeply impressed by the respect he showed for us.As he treated us like friends rather than students,we all liked to visit his home for social activities as well as for advice.
Although it was over a year now since I attended his last class,he is the talk of our old classmates,and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.
批改：
1. It is his special quality that is always kept in my memory. 本句话用的不错。
2. I was attracked by his wide range of knowledge. 被深深地吸引了，单词用错。with great eaherness 笔误，单词拼写错误。
3. it was over a year now since I attended his last class 时态错误，是is.
评析：
本篇文章是一篇描述人物的作文，刻画的这位好英语教师栩栩如生，非常好！中间用了大量的词汇和短语，基本上没有语法错误，很打动人，期待更好的佳作！
