Just like every other young student,I have a beautiful dream,especially when the entrance examination is drawing near.Since my childhood,I have always hoped to become a doctor.
I was once very sick and later a good doctor cured me.Then I secretly hope that one day I would be a person as great as him.I hope that with my professional knowledge and skill and with my great love for the patients,I will be able to save a lot of people's lives,and I don't mind working hard or living a simple life.
I just want to live a meaningful life.I feel that living for the benefit of many other people is noble,and I will try to live up to my expectation.
评析：
全篇写得非常好，有一篇优秀的习作。词语恰当，语句通顺，结构合理。
