Dear Henry,
I am glad to receive your letter.Thank goodness, I just know today is so beautiful.I have completed the college entrance examination eventually,which make me amaze and relax.You know,I was tired of studying when you sat in an annoying classroom everyday.But now I am so comfortable and I will have a good rest in future.For example,playing basketball and riding a bike are my favorate sports,which can make me enjoy myself everyday.During the time,I also reading some world-famous books from which I will gain a lot of knowledge.Surely,I will accompany my beloved parents to my hometown or other places.Joining the social activities are necessary, from which not only I can enrich my experience,but also contact with society better than before,At last, thank you for your help.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
By the way, I have completed all college entrance examination compositions of 2008.Thank you very much for everyone,especially Oscar.Becasue of Oscar,I can progress quickly.Because of Oscar,I am able to know writing a compositon need a serious heart.Because of Oscar,I am able to know every error need correct whatever it is big or small.
批改：
1. which make me amaze and relax. 应该用单三，makes.
2. when you sat in an annoying classroom everyday. 人称错误，是I .
3. my favorate sports, 单词拼写错误。
4. I also reading some world-famous books 估计是笔误，不能构成谓语动词。
5. Surely,I will accompany my beloved parents to my hometown or other places. 本句话写得不错。
评析：
本篇文章是篇好习作，用词准确，并且运用了多种句型结构，内容也很丰富。你很执着，把高考作文都完成了，真的很了不起！期望你能继续坚持自己的写作，让英语写作更上一层楼！
In the end, thank you for your excellent composition!
