Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.I agree on it absolutely because all we want to improve English reading ability and know your culture and history better than before.You know,if we often reading our English books,we are not interested in books at all,so we greatly need the magazine.Actually,I love many kinds of columns,especially about NBA and tour de France as I am just good at basketball and bike.By the way,our English calligraphy is bad in our class, resulting in our English compositions can not get high marks,so I hope can create a column which teaches how to improve it.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
批改：
1. because all we 应该是all of us
2. if we often reading our English books, 估计是笔误，没有真正的谓语动词了。
3. resulting in our English compositions can not get high marks, result in 导致，一般后边不能引导句子的，所以可以直接用resulting即可。
4. ,so I hope can create a column which teaches how to improve it. 错误很明显，如果Hope后面是宾语从句的话，宾语从句缺少主语。
评析：
文章内容充实，结构清晰，用词准确，语法错误较少，是一篇优秀习作，真是越来越好了！
