Dear friends,
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore,it’s very important for us to form healthy cating habits.Nowaday,most of us don’t want to eat breakfast at all bacause of various reasons.On the contrary,most of us are fond of eating snack,and even some students are bartieular about food,or some of us eat too much every meal.All of these are wrong practices which not only are bad to our health,but also affect our study virtually,so we need develop good eating habites,for example,as far as possible,we should eat many kinds of food every meal because there have a lot of food which are good for us absolutely.What’s more,our eating time can’t often be changed.Actually,I think eating habites is very important for everyone,especially the growing students.Wherever we are or what we do,eating surely is the first consideration forever.
That’s all thank you.
批改：
1. cating habits 单词拼写错误。bacause of 笔误。
2. some students are bartieular about food, 单词拼写错误。
3. as far as possible 此词组用法错误。
4. there have a lot of food which are good for us absolutely. 应该是there be句型。
5. ,I think eating habites is 第一单词拼写错误，第二，如果是复数，后边BE动词应该是are.
评析：
文章内容充实，用词和句法基本上都很准确，是篇好文章，但要注意单词拼写错误哦！
