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Dairy
作者:zhlin    时间:2008-11-26    状态:已批改   点击数:69    [收藏该文章]
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 I am not happy today.When I got  to my school, I saw my classmate Yu.He came to me and asked me for five yuan.I rememer he borrowed me five yuan last Monday.But he don't give me.But now?I  did't kown what I should do.I want to tell him the money he borrowed.But I am afride he is unhappy.I thought about it for a minutes.I borrowed the money to him.I hope he will not forget this time



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But he don't give me.应是But he doesn't  give me.he 是第三人称的单数

I  did't kown what I should do.应是 I  didn't know what I should do.单词拼写错误

But I am afride he is unhappy.应是 But I am afriad he is unhappy.单词拼写错误

I borrowed the money to him.应是I lent the money to him.borrowe是借入,而lend 是借出

不要为此事担心,你可以告诉她,或许他忘了。你如果觉得当面开不了口,可以写封信或打电话,也可以找个朋友暗示一下。如果她借的这些钱再不给,你就当面去要,不要助长她的坏习惯。

                    
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