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My friend
作者:zhwf    时间:2008-11-26    状态:已批改   点击数:150    [收藏该文章]
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My friend is my classmate Yugang. He sits behind me.He is older than me.But I am taller than him.We often talk about the questions together.I am more active than him.And  I am better at schoolwork than him.We go home together after school.Sometimes I take him to school on my bike,Sometimes he take me to school on his bike.My classmates say we are like twins.



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,Sometimes he take me to school on his bike.应是,Sometimes he takes me to school on his bike.第三人称的单数

友谊诚可贵,小作者描绘了自己和朋友之间的友情,语言简朴,真情于字里行间流露。好好珍惜你们的友谊,这是人一生中最宝贵的财富之一。

                    
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