All students need have good study habits. When you have good study habits,you learn things quickly .You also remember them easily .Do you like to study in the living room ? This is not a good place because it is usually too noisy.you need study in a quite place ,like your bedroom .A quite place will help you only think about one thing, and you will learn better.
Before you begin studying , do not forget to clean your desk . A good desk light is important,too.You will feel tiring easily if there is not enough light .
need在此文中是实义动词，需要做某事应该是need to do sth .All students need to have good study habits.you need to study in a quite place.
quiet 是adj 安静的，而quite 是 adv 完全地。you need to study in a quiet place. A quiet place will help you only think about one thing, and you will learn better.
begin to do sth 开始做某事，Before you begin studying 应该改为 before you begin to study
You will feel tiring easily if there is not enough light 此句中 tiring 应该改为 tired 因为这里是指人的感觉，而不是指物。
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