Thank my parents for their loving support
竹山一中高一（16），张宝升
December 18th
Dear Mom and Dad,
Yesterday I received your long letter of November 28th. I was looking forward to that letter and want to thank you for it. But not only should I thank you for your letter, I feel you are the most wonderful parents in the world. If I look around me, I see some students hardly ever hear from their parents. And when I think about you, my heart fills with warmth. So I want to thank you for all your loving support.
Your letters always make me very happy especially when photos are enclosed. I can only send you a short letter today and promise I will write more, later this week. At this moment we are very busy preparing for the term exam.
So, how are things at home? I hope Mother’s work in the office is going well. Last time you wrote about the new project that would start. I think working on that job must be very exciting. I suppose everybody already starts thinking about the Spring Festival. Of course, I will be home for that.
Well, thank you again and all the best for the folks back home.
Love,
Emily Zhang
点评:格式正确，文笔流畅，内容具体，感情真挚！一篇经典的范文佳作！
亮点：1：I was looking forward to...
2.not only should I thank you for your letter.倒装句型。
3.hardly ever 几乎从未。
4.my heart fills with warmth.
5.make me very happy.
6.especially when photos are enclosed.尤其是信内附有照片。
7.we are very busy preparing fof the term exam.
8.all the best for the folks back home.祝家里人万事如意！
