My fellow chinese , ask not what your countr can do for you , ask what you can do for your country . Nw, I think nobody can say that rises for China to stuy . I want to say I can't , but I will place my patriotic heart in my left side pocket .
Perhaps you yearned for that the foreign life condition superior or has the advance science and technology to think China is not an ideal country . Then I will tell you , you are wrong . Some developed country at material rich time otfen hiding crisis .For example present's financial crisis . Some Asian area's country have many dispute with religious , also have Terriorist organization's attact . China is one of four ancient nations , has five sthound historical culture .Now she is a great country which turns toward harmoniously develop .
When you stand on the Great Wall , when you walk along the bank of Yellow river , when you hear the anthen resound , isn't your mood excieted ?
Although my matherland experienced many tribulations , but I belive that only have exprienced then can become formidable . I love you, my matherland . I love you , China .
My fellow chinese , don't what your country can do for you , but ask what you can do for your country . Now, I think nobody can say that he studies for China to rise . I want to say I can't , but I will place my patriotic heart in my left pocket .
Perhaps you yearn for that the foreign life condition is superior to that in China or has the advanced science and technology or think China is not an ideal country . Then I will tell you , you are wrong . Some developed countries otfen hid crisises at rich material times ,for example , present financial crisis . Some countries in Asian have many disputes about their religious and Terriorist attacts. China is one of the four ancient nations , wiht a historical culture of five thoundsant years .Now she is a great country which turns toward harmonious development .
When you stand on the Great Wall , when you walk along the bank of Yellow river , aren't you excieted ?
Although my motherland experienced many troubles , I believe that only from expriences can she become formidable . I love you, my motherland . I love you , China .
能写出这么有真挚感情的文章，“好”就一个字。但是很多的地方用的都是汉语式的英语单词弄起来的。建议多背诵英语书面表达的范文。
