Come and buy your clothes at loveyou's great sale! Do you like T-shtrt? We have T-shtrt at a very good price------only 10 yuan! Do you need shoes for sports? We have great shoes for only 35 yuan! For girls,we have hat in black, blue and white for only 5 yuan! For boys,you can buy pants in yellow,green and red for only 25 yuan each! Anybody can afford our prices!
Come and see for yourself at loveyou Clothes Store!
1. at loveyou's great sale应改为at LoveYou's great sale，很显然此处的LoveYou是专有名词，要大写。
2. We have T-shtrt 应改为We have T-shirts.，单词出现拼写错误。
3. For girls,we have hat in black其中的hat应改为hats，应该是复数形式。
4. at loveyou Clothes Store其中的loveyou应改为LoveYou。
从文章来看，本文是一篇非常不错的佳作，小作者能熟练运用所学知识，对课文内容的掌握也非常牢固，如果再细心一点，可能会更好。
