Dear friend,
How was your day off? Did you have fun travalling? I didn't have a fun day. I visited my uncles. When I got there,they were very busy working. I had to help them .On that day ,I was very tired.My aunt made dumplings for us in the evening.They thanked me for help them. Oh, i was very happy that day although I was very tired. p lease write to me tell me your day off.I am waiting.
See you soon
Fang
Did you have fun travalling?应是Did you have fun travelling ?单词写错
When I got there,they were very busy working很不错的句子，值得鼓励
They thanked me for help them. 应是They thanked me for helping them. 动词接在介词的后面要加ing
Oh, i was very happy that day although I was very tired. 注意 I 要大写，很好的句子，用了although
p lease write to me tell me your day off.注意 大小写
很好的一篇习作，而且有很多很好的句子，值得我们学习，希望你能继续努力！
