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All students should wear a school uniform
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                            All students should wear a school uniform

           Students are special persons. Most of the time, they are in school and most of them want to study hard and go to a good school. If you go outside of the school, you will found that many students like to be special. They wear different kinds of clothes and sport a special hair style. They think they all are one in a million.

           To be noticed, some of the students don’t wear uniform in their school, so today many principals set rules to control the students who don’t like wearing the school uniforms in school.

            In my view, I think all students should wear a school uniform to go to school. However, in previous times, people seek for individual.

            If you wear a uniform to go to school, you will look neat and smart, not like the other students who don’t like wearing school uniform. If all the students wear the school uniforms, everyone will look like the same. That will enhance the school be pride.

            Every girl wants to look like pretty and every boy wants to look like handsome. They are always tired of choosing which clothes they should wear which make them look like pretty or handsome. If you wear a school uniform, you will not have to think about what to wear. It will save a lot of time and energy.

           Different people have different jobs, so they have different uniforms. When you are walking on the road, you will see many kinds of people. As a student, if you wear a school uniform, you will be identified quickly as being a student of a century school.

            Besides, as a student, if you wear a school uniform to go to school, when people see you, they will know who you are and if you are not an adult, maybe will protect you, when you are in trouble.

            All in all, I think that all students should wear a school uniform.

 

 



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All students should wear a school uniform

           Students are special persons.  They are almost always in school and most of them want to study hard and go to a good school. If you go outside of the school, you will found that many students like to be different. They wear different kinds of clothes and wear  special hair styles. They think they all are one in a million.
           Notably, some of the students don’t wear uniform in their school, so today many principals set rules to control the students who don’t like wearing the school uniforms in school.
            In my view,  all students should wear a school uniform to go to school. However, in most times, people seek for individual.
            If you wear a uniform to go to school, you will look neat and smart, not like the other students who don’t like wearing school uniform. If all the students wear the school uniforms, everyone will look like the same. That will enhance the  pride for the school.
            Every girl wants to look   pretty and every boy wants to look  handsome. They are always tired of choosing which clothes they should wear ,which makes them look   pretty or handsome. If you wear a school uniform, you will not have to think about what to wear. It will save a lot of time and energy.
           Different people have different jobs, so they have different uniforms. When you are walking on the road, you will see many kinds of people. As a student, if you wear a school uniform, you will be identified quickly as   a student of a certain school.
            Besides, as a student, if you wear a school uniform to go to school, when people see you, they will know who you are and if you are not an adult,  It maybe will protect you, when you are in trouble.
            All in all, I think that all students should wear a school uniform.
 
能用基本的英语地道地表达这么丰富的内容,足见有较好的基本功。但要注意英语的一些常用的句子结构,如look like不能后接形容词。
                    
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