Class 4 had a great time on that day.They went to the Zoo for the day.Fists ,they went to the monkeys. They saw the smart monkeys. Then they went to see the tigers. They said the tigers are very big ,and they aer very scary. Finally ,they went to the shops and bought mang things fir themselves.Tired,but happy,they took the bus back to school.And the monitor cleaned the bus after the trip.
Fists ,they went to the monkeys 应是First ,they went to the monkeys'注意单词的拼写
and they aer very scary. 应是and they are very scary. 单词拼写错误
and bought mang things fir themselves.应是and bought many things for themselves.同上
很不错的一篇仿写文章，句子通顺，意思连贯，只是不够细心，望以后写作细心！
